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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

without killing
the fathomed tao
is never understood
the wise men equally need cultivated spirit
penetative glasses settle the doubts
stalking the yarrow
because they are round


To this:

without killing
the fathomed tao
is never understood
the wise men equally
need cultivated spirits
penetrating glasses
settle the doubts
stalking the yarrow
because they are round


With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.


...8)
...Just being Bluesy
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