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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

wishes from the white rushes
an older retreat
from PI stills
distance lines bring fatigue
a halted judgment gains referred small tacks

To this:

wishes from the white rushes
an older retreat from PI
still distant lines bring fatigue
a halted judgment gains
reference with small tax

With respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.

...

...Just being Bluesy

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:01 pm

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