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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

instinctive cultivation
approaches the life force
the growthing cow suggest vigor
thrashing first symbolic sprouting
using to refine the distill
dis still
d i s s t i l l


To this:

instinctive cultivation
approaches the life force
growing cows suggest vigor
first thrashing
then symbolically sprouting
using their grain
distilled refinery

d i s s t i l l


With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.



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