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Bluesy Socrateaser

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Joined: Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:14 am

From this:

passages quoted themselves
insight achieved identifiations
inner truth
personal power
and incorruptible simplicity rode the oz

To this:

passages quoted themselves
insights achieved identifications
inner truth brought personal power
and incorruptible simplicity
rode the oz

With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.

...

...Just being Bluesy

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:28 pm

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