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Bluesy Socrateaser

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Joined: Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:14 am

From this:

intrigues influence
indulge
intriges
a natural prospering
among people
weapons regulate simple
cunning strategy
effortlessness
defects

To this:

an intriguing influence
indulges a natural
prospering among people
weapons simply regulate
a cunning strategy
effortless intimidation
defects of weakened society

With respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.

...

...Just being Bluesy

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:10 pm

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