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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

with men
the superior furthers
the onion strength open
corrects the un able to read
unity yielding for 5th in the 9th place
counting the possiblities in central humiliations
mean men beneath chien heaven in the 2 place
represent the needy trigram
unselfishly of course
they place their numbers
as support
for server hours and rent free
the wills of the great water
find the famous copper caldron green slimy and moldy of course
9 in the 3rd pales face
is spent
remorse for the jersy cow
rain falls 104 times the foods is racid
the eatten pheasent willy fat
finds his way of life once again
cultured as a dairy cow in the field

To this:

men with superior powers
further the strength
of an open onion correcting
those unable to read
unity yielding for 5th
in the 9th place
counting the possiblities
in centralized humiliations
mean men beneath a chained heaven
forced into the 2nd place
represent the needy triad
unselfishly they place their numbers
as support for several hours rent free
while the wills of the great water
find the famous copper cauldron
green slimy and moldy as
backwaters in flooded faces
9 in the 3rd paled faces
are spent remorseful for the jersey cow
rain falls 104 times and the food is rancid
the eaten pheasant will fatten as he
finds his way of life once again
cultured as a dairy cow in the field

With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.

...

...Just being Bluesy

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:16 pm

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