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Biting, Biting, Biting Shih Ho

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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

his life is with balm
a forgotten fifth place verb
the choice chico
AHhhhh
the choice
light of the kingdom reflexs filth in the fifth place

To this:

his life is with balm
a forgotten fifth place verb
the choice of Chico
Ahhhhh...
the light of choice in the kingdom
reflects filth in the fifth place

With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.

...

...Just being Bluesy

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:56 pm

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