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Bluesy Socrateaser

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studs stand on stormy clappers
order dealing with hexagram 34
old heroes
yu mean preparation
PRE PAR
this suggest
the night watchman
with firm resolutions
HE WATCHES
waiting
wading the yellow suns punishment
the commander
of marching armies
smiles with devotion
to the secrets


To this:

studs stand on stormy clappers
order dealing with hexagram 34
old heroes, yu means preparation
PREPARE
this suggests
the night watchman
with his firm resolutions
WATCHES
waiting
wading in the yellow suns punishment
the commander of marching armies
smiles with devotion to the secrets


With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.



...8)
...Just being Bluesy
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