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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

power in modesty
overcomes the female stillness
becoming love makes service supported
resented aggressiveness
to rule is to serve

To this:

the power in modesty
overcomes the female stillness
making love becomes service supported
and to resent aggressiveness
is to rule and serve

With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.

...

...Just being Bluesy

Posted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:21 pm

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