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Bluesy Socrateaser

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From this:

saving things
bolted ruts
schemes for flaws
inferior people cherish the reasouce
significant subtlety does not treasure


To this:

saving things
bolts and nuts
and flawed schemes
inferior people
cherish their resources
subtle treasures
are not significant


With Respects,

As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.



...8)
...Just being Bluesy
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