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the idling offspring
remains an open passager
erased ten thousand lotus seeds
holding less for fear
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Posted: Thu Dec 23, 2004 8:53 am Report this post to a moderator
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I am sorry but for me - my fear is as to whether it is me or this poem which is chaotic.
Lines do not link up and it makes me wonder if this is some form of mickey taking?
Sorry again but this idling passager has erased this from his mind.
Born and bred a country yokel
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I'm not quite sure of what meaning (if any) there is to be gotten from this poem, but I like it for reasons I can't really explain. Then again, there's a lot of time that I don't make sense, so that might have something to do with it.
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