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Posted by Bluesy Socrateaser on Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:13 am
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From this:
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<br />without killing
<br />the fathomed tao
<br />is never understood
<br />the wise men equally need cultivated spirit
<br />penetative glasses settle the doubts
<br />stalking the yarrow
<br />because they are round
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<br />To this:
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<br />without killing
<br />the fathomed tao
<br />is never understood
<br />the wise men equally
<br />need cultivated spirits
<br />penetrating glasses
<br />settle the doubts
<br />stalking the yarrow
<br />because they are round
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<br />With Respects,
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<br />As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.
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