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Posted by Bluesy Socrateaser on Wed Mar 11, 2009 5:55 am
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From this:
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<br />the idling offspring
<br />remains an open passager
<br />erased ten thousand lotus seeds
<br />holding less for fear
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<br />To this:
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<br />the idling offspring
<br />remains an open passenger
<br />removing ten thousand lotus seeds
<br />yet holding on to far fewer
<br />for fear he too will become one
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<br />With Respects,
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<br />As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.
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<br />...<img src="http://www.poetsquill.com/images/forums/emoticons/cool.gif" alt='8)' />
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