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Posted by Bluesy Socrateaser on Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:01 pm
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From this:
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<br />wishes from the white rushes
<br />an older retreat
<br />from PI stills
<br />distance lines bring fatigue
<br />a halted judgment gains referred small tacks
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<br />To this:
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<br />wishes from the white rushes
<br />an older retreat from PI
<br />still distant lines bring fatigue
<br />a halted judgment gains
<br />reference with small tax
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<br />With respects,
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<br />As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain.
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