Biting, Biting, Biting Shih Ho

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Posted by Bluesy Socrateaser on Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:56 pm
From this: <br /> <br />his life is with balm <br />a forgotten fifth place verb <br />the choice chico <br />AHhhhh <br />the choice <br />light of the kingdom reflexs filth in the fifth place <br /> <br /> <br />To this: <br /> <br />his life is with balm <br />a forgotten fifth place verb <br />the choice of Chico <br />Ahhhhh... <br />the light of choice in the kingdom <br />reflects filth in the fifth place <br /> <br /> <br />With Respects, <br /> <br />As little as possible was done in order that a bit of the abstract flavor that was originally intended would remain. <br /> <br /> <br />...<img src="http://www.poetsquill.com/images/forums/emoticons/cool.gif" alt='8)' />